here is a my manga project summary that I've improved with advice from cecangio, on Manga-designer.com.
Story take place in 2014, Takashi Yamashita is 16, he will study to kagome high school in the 1-Y class, this class is special because there only Yokai and other fantasy creature who come from all over the world.Why there is a human in this class? That's because Takashi know about the yokai's existence and he's a "Hunter", there mission's to track down and punish those who want to broke peace between human and the hidden world. but 16 year ago,during a battle which opposed the peace breaker and the hunter/hidden world coalition, hunter go on retreat, leaving hidden world forces be massacred. Since this bloody day the hidden world don't trusted hunter any more, so why Takashi doing this?
that's all. Compare old and new version and give me your opinion, thanks